June 27, 2006 / 6:21 p.m.

you fucking kids
with your metaphors
and analogies
trying to create art
trying to be artistic
and deep
and meaningful
the only thing you're doing
is masking shitty writing
with even more shitty illusions
your poetry is nothing more than teenage angst
and an eleventh grade vocabulary.
leave your house for a couple hours
get off your computer
and live your life
before you even begin to try
to write about a world
you know nothing about

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